LESSON 5.9
Citing Before Information

In the previous lesson you learned how to give credit to authors at the end of information. This lesson will cover how to give credit before information.

Experiments and Similar Studies

Scientists and other researchers often conduct experiments, perform surveys, or do similar studies.

Let’s say you write the following paraphrase:

From 2008-2012, a study was conducted in northeastern Spain. Three scientists wanted to know why the litter sizes of wild boar in that region were so much larger than in other provinces.

Why should readers have to wait to find out the names of the researchers?

To avoid that, place the citation before the information. The beginning of the paragraph might read:

From 2008-2012, Rosell et al. (2012) conducted in northeastern Spain. They wanted to know why the litter sizes of wild boar in that region were so much larger than in other provinces.

When Not to Cite Before Information

Avoid citing after the information and before the information in the same paragraph.  It is easy to develop a problem regarding which citation some information belongs to. In the paragraph below, for instance, we know that the information in Sentence 1 comes from Servanty et al. and that the information in Sentence 3 is from Fenner.  But what about the information in Sentence 2? Does it belong to Servanty et al. or to Fenner?

Servanty et al. (2009) collected and analyzed data on 1,666 female wild boars from a forest in Northeast France between 1983 and 2005. The researchers concluded that sow breeding peaked when rainfall and temperature were high in the summer. This is because a rainy and hot summer leads to a longer vegetative growing season (Fenner, 1998).

Here the problem is fixed:

Servanty et al. (2009) collected and analyzed data on 1,666 female wild boars from a forest in Northeast France between 1983 and 2005. The researchers concluded that sow breeding peaked when rainfall and temperature were high in the summer. Fenner (1998) also pointed out that a rainy and hot summer leads to a longer vegetative growing season.

Some Citation Specifics

Before-information citations differ slightly from after-information citations:

  • The names occur outside of the parenthesis. Only the year will be inside.

After information

(Williams, 2014).

Before information

Williams (2014) believed that …

  • The word and takes the place of the ampersand.

After information

(Smith & Wesson, 2021).

Before information

Smith and Wesson (2021) argued that  …

  • If you start the sentence with According to, a comma will occur after the parenthesis. Otherwise, there will be no punctuation there.

Correct

According to Smith and Wesson (2021), the research

Correct

Smith and Wesson (2021) argued that …

Incorrect

Smith and Wesson (2021), argued that …

  • The verb is called a signal word. It helps readers interpret the material by telling them the researchers’ reactions.
  • Do not continuously use said, stated, or suggested. Instead, read the material carefully, and chose the most appropriate word that describes the author’s or authors’ reactions.

Weak
         Janson and Javonich (2002) say that …
Good
         Janson and Javonich (2002) insist that …

An incomplete list of signal verbs and signal verb phrases includes—

accepted that
According to …
acknowledged that
added that
admitted that
advised that
advocated that
agreed, saying that
alleged that
argued that
asked
asserted that
believed that
claimed that
commented on that, saying that
compared that
conjectured that
contended that
conveyed the idea that
credited that
declared that
deferred to
demanded that
denied that
disputed that
emphasized that
encouraged that
endorsed that
explained that
formed a theory that
formulated a theory that
found that
granted that
guessed that
had considered that
had interjected
held that
hypothesized that
illustrated that
imagined that
implied that
implied that
inferred that
informed
insinuated that
insisted that
intimated that
introduced
maintained that
noted that
observed that
outlined
pointed out that
posited that
promoted
proposed that
propounded that
put forward
questioned that
reasoned that
recommended that
referred to
refuted that, saying
rejected that,
reported that
said that
speculated that
suggested that
suggested that
supposed that
surmised that
theorized that
thought that
urged that
wrote that

You can also use a had form such as,

Delmore and Krep (2018) had questioned . . .

Signal Verbs in MLA and in Chicago

There are three main ways of formatting papers:

APA
MLA
Chicago

APA is the most common. However, many instructors prefer one of the others.  In APA, the signal verb is in past tense.  It ends is a t, d or ed sound. In MLA and Chicago, the signal verb will end in in s if there is one author.

On Author

APA
        Williams (2019) argued that …
MLA
        Williams (2019) argues that …
Chicago
        Williams (2019) suggests that …

Two Authors

APA
         Smith and Wesson (2021) argued that …
MLA
         Smith and Wesson (2021) argue that …
Chicago
         Smith and Wesson (1997) suggest that …

3+ Authors

APA
       Smith and Wesson (2021) argued that …
MLA
       Smith and Wesson (2021) argue that …
Chicago
       Smith and Wesson (1997) suggest that …

Task 5.9.1 – Tandem

Are the in-text APA citations of these paragraphs correct or incorrect? 

  1. According to Solér & Plazas (2012), our eating habits are changing rapidly. In the past, family mealtimes were a common household tradition. Now, people might engage in more individualized eating habits. The researchers suggested that there are certain meal types that are fast to make and can be made to be nutritious and filling. While Haugaard et al. (2016) look at the eating workplace trends among Danes, Solér and Plazas (2012) examined the family homes of Swedes. Swedish families often consider the Mexican tacos to be a social dish that has taken over as a modern Friday night family dinner. Mexican dishes have become adapted around the world for their convenience and bold flavors. Across Europe and the U.K. Mexican food is the third most common type of ethnic cuisine, after Indian and Chinese. Tacos in particular are a favorite for their ease of preparation, common and versatile ingredients, and their fresh vegetables.
  2. Marijuana is illegal for medical and recreational purposes under federal law and is categorized as a Schedule 1 Drug, indicating a high potential for abuse (Glascoff et al., 2013). However, 18 US states and the District of Colombia have legalized marijuana for recreational use in the last nine years. Medical marijuana is legal in 37 states. Bae and Kerr’s 10-year study (2020) on recreational marijuana use found a positive association between marijuana legalization and marijuana use among college students. Legalization also led to a decrease in alcohol consumption and did not disrupt a decrease in marijuana use among adolescents. Lensch et al. (2020) notes that the observed trends connected to marijuana legalization require increased educational efforts in the future that are similar to alcohol education campaigns in the past.
  3. Studies have revealed the advantages of marketing non-traditional sports in comparison to mainstream sports. For example, Cohen, A. (2012) found that sport corporations are actually more likely to participate in non-traditional sports activities due to the perception that they provide cost effective sponsorship opportunities. These types of sports can thrive in various markets due to their ability to differentiate from other sports. Cohen (2012) also states that sports marketers who can focus on promoting these unique attributes will be more successful in attracting and retaining fans. Thorpe and Wheaton (2011) also shows that over the past five decades many action-type sports have experienced unprecedented growth both in participation and in their increased visibility across the public space within the Olympics.